Nighttime thunderstorms
Rumble through my weary mind
Keeping me awake
Thoughts wash in and out
I can't focus long enough
to clear out my head
My brain is too full
A dryer of tumbling rocks
Banging and shifting
I can't shut if off
They tumble out of my ears
Onto my pillow
Rain taps at the glass
And lulls me to sleep at last
Oh but not for long
i love sleeping to rain, but not storms. that i find almost impossible.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE it when thunder wakes me up. I know that's weird, but I do.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great Haiku! I feel that way sometimes, just can't get to sleep.
ReplyDeleteSorry you didn't sleep well, but at least you got a great haiku out of it! (That's me trying to be a Tigger!)
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday!
Great haiku. Hopefully you'll be able to take a nap today and get some rest ;)
ReplyDeleteKathryn, it's really strange but my brain just hasn't globbed on to reading haikus, so I usually give it a half-assed try, then ... fade out. So today, I saw it first on google reader, and in that format, it jumped out at me. I LOVE IT!
ReplyDeleteNow I have to go back and really read and absorb your beautiful haiku's.
And, as always, your music is so, so good.
So sorry you're tired, but that was beautiful 'ku. :)
ReplyDeleteSorry you are tired but that haiku ROCKED! Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh Kathryn, I'm sorry the storm kept you up. That was a beautiful Haiku though, especially being sleep deprived.
ReplyDeleteHope you find rest soon.
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ReplyDeleteAt least it was RAIN and not SNOW!! yay!!!
ReplyDeletelovely 'ku. it's tough to sleep with all that racket...
ReplyDeleteNice Ku. Sorry for the storms keeping you awake.
ReplyDeleteI know just what you mean! Great haiku.
ReplyDeleteThat was me yesterday morning. Maybe it moved directly north? I wish you a night full of sleep...and great naps from the boys today.
ReplyDeleteWow-- this was a really great haiku. You certainly have the ability to write! I wouldn't mind a few t-storms and rain on the glass. It's a nice change from snow isn't it :-)
ReplyDeleteImpressive haiku because it's actually very poetic. I kind of miss storms since we don't get many out this way, but I don't really miss that feeling.
ReplyDeletePowerfully, your words
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rich enough to feel!
Thanks for visiting
Sacred Ruminations … my
second ‘ku is here ;--)
I do hope tonight
you catch up on 'missing' sleep
and have pleasant dreams !
Hugs and blessings,
I'm hearing you... I need sleep. Badly.
ReplyDeleteNice post! Sometimes sleeping is just plain hard work.
ReplyDeleteOh no! Sorry to hear that you are so tired. Hope that you were able to get at least a nap in?
ReplyDeleteI am going to try and be positive.....at least it didn't snow. :-)
Have a great weekend!
lovely!!
ReplyDeleteI fall asleep to rain. Almost. every. single. night.
Sometimes I feel like you live inside my head! We too, had rain and thunder last night. I loved the metaphor of the dryer...that fits me to a T. Have a wonderful weekend.
ReplyDeleteWOW K, they was seriously fantastic. I loved it. Our storms kept me and my son up too - and you know that Last Lecture is still stuck in my head. :O
ReplyDeleteKathryn... you blew the storms my way. Again. :)
ReplyDeleteSweet post.
Oh I like this one! I often have trouble getting to sleep because of all of the noise of the day still rattling around in my brain. Great 'ku.
ReplyDeleteGreat Haiku, Kathryn. I think you write the best Haiku's of nearly everyone!!
ReplyDeleteHave a good weekend - see ya - Kellan
I am glad it rain and not snow. I sometime like rainy nights as long as it not to stormy.
ReplyDeleteI usually sleep through them. It's only when scared child come into bed that wakes me up.
ReplyDeleteBetter rain than snow.
Great haiku!
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That was a beautiful Haiku. I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog!
So beautiful.... I love the image of the rain "tap[ping] at the glass" (among other lines) -- beautifully put.... You're evolving into a really great poet.... :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Haiku, Kathryn!
ReplyDeleteAlthough I do love a good thunderstorm!
Dear blogging friend,
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Your haiku are always so beautiful.
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